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James Wangs' Tuff Crater Poem I saw a Kingfisher fishing a humongous fish, I hear the Kingfisher drop the fish in the river, I feel the wind because they zoomed pass me fast as a car, I smell the mud at the mud puddles, I taste the fruit juice in my mouth.

Ricky Lais' Tuff Crater Poem I see elegant fantail on a branch, I hear the speedy cars on the motorway, I feel the cutty grass as sharp as scissors, I smell the sticky, squishy mud as oozy as slime, I taste the waffles as hot as burning fire.

Yewons' Tuff Crater Poem I see the beautiful Kingfisher fly through the air, I hear the birds singing, I feel soft wind going past me, I smell flowers growing, I taste the juicy berries.

Carlys' Tuff Crater Poem I see the fog fading away, I hear the leaves rustling as I walk, I feel the people stomping along, I smell muddy slimey water, I taste waffles filling me up.

Jacques' Tuff Crater Poem I see the shiny sea, I hear the fantails cheeping away, I feel the swaying breeze through the air, I smell the stinky mud, I taste the delicious waffles and jam.

Alyssa Shaw's Tuff Crater Poem I went to Tuff crater and what did I see I saw some birds and other things, what a fantasy I also felt some stuff Like grass and hay What a wonderful world Yah! I went to Tuff Crater and what did I taste I tasted the breeze, it tasted so nice it made me sneeze I also heard some cars and birds.

Jazmin's Tuff Crater Poem I see the wonderful whistling birds I hear rocks rumbling under my feet I feel trees as wet as a water slide I smell squishy mud and water I taste waffles with yummy jam.

Ava's Autumn Poem On the way to school I saw some leaves They were golden leaves They were beautiful colourful leaves They were crispy lovely delicious leaves They were crispy crunchy colourful leaves They moved like the wind They sounded like rice bubbles They moved liked butterflies They made me feel like I was flying

Madison's Tuff crater poem I see the rocks crunching I hear the dogs barking I feel the sticky mud I smell the delicious waffles I taste the crunchy toast.

Tudor's Tuff Crater Poem I see the tuis flying in the sky I hear the fantail call I feel tired on the way back I smell Mrs Barlow's socks I taste the hot waffles.

Danny's Autumn Poem On the way to school I saw some leaves They were small leaves They were large great leaves They chocolate crunchy colourful leaves They were green, red, brown, gold leaves They moved like a slug They sounded like a chocolate bar Some leaves are not crunchy.

Chloe's Autumn Poem On the way to school I saw some leaves They were small leaves They were tiny beautiful leaves They were bright brown bold leaves They were crunchy, crackling, caramel chocolate leaves They moved like a kite blowing away They sounded like chips crunching They made me feel like I was walking on air.

Jessy's Tuff Crater Poem I see some still spiders I hear hungry birds I feel my fabulous feet I smell stones so stinky I taste two waffles as hot as fire.

Yong Chan's Tuff Crater Poem I see the cute fantails I hear the kingfisher singing I feel really hungry and mad because I am so tired I smell the smelly leaves I taste crunchy cereal now I am so tired.